• PhilipTheBucket@ponder.catOP
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    3 days ago

    I really tried to capture the unhinged emotional anger that is a key component but I don’t think I managed to do it. The muddled-ness of the jumping between different targets, and the hurt and anger that spurts out randomly from every word, are both a lot more important than any particular narrative element I think.