sag@lemm.ee to Memes@lemmy.ml · 1 year ago[Tutorial]How to impress her Dadtelegra.phimagemessage-square13fedilinkarrow-up1880arrow-down125
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minus-squarelurch (he/him)@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up5arrow-down2·1 year agoWhat’s your problem with it?
minus-squareSuperSaiyanSwag@lemmy.ziplinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up17arrow-down1·1 year agoI should have said “in my opinion”. The final line just seems too much, maybe it works better as a comic strip? The “looks at daughter” seems necessary, but makes the punchline longer.
minus-squarebstixlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up15arrow-down1·edit-21 year agoYou shouldn’t have pointed it out at all. Now we have to come up with a better punchline. Like: " Sorry kid, the bank does that"
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What’s your problem with it?
I should have said “in my opinion”. The final line just seems too much, maybe it works better as a comic strip? The “looks at daughter” seems necessary, but makes the punchline longer.
You shouldn’t have pointed it out at all. Now we have to come up with a better punchline.
Like: " Sorry kid, the bank does that"